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Writing a Dissertation Report

Writing a Dissertation Report

Dr Ian Cornelius

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Writing a Dissertation Report

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What is a Dissertation?

  • Different to a normal essay or body of work you may have previously submitted
  • A larger piece of writing, typically between 6,000 to 10,000 words
  • The report should be:
    • contestable and focused
    • assert your own conclusions based upon evidence
    • provocative, whereby you take a stand and justify the discussion you are presenting
    • provides a route to the reader to guide them through your work
  • The report should not be written in first-person and avoid vague language

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Structure of the Dissertation Report

  • Title Page
  • Declaration of Originality, Copyright and Ethics
  • Abstract
  • Table of Contents
  • List of Tables (if applicable)
  • List of Figures (if applicable)
  • Acronyms (if applicable)
  • Chapter 1: Introduction
  • Chapter 2: Literature Review
  • Chapter 3: Methodology
  • Chapter 4: Results and Analysis
  • Chapter 5: Discussion
  • Chapter 6: Project Management
  • Chapter 7: Conclusion
  • Bibliography
  • Appendices (if applicable)

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Creating a Title for the Project

  • The title page will reflect the whole content of the dissertation
  • It should be informative, and to the point
  • The title will also be in harmony with the content of the thesis
  • The goal of the title is to draw the reader’s interest
    • typically, will be between 8 and 15 words long
  • You will want to be specific and accurate with the title
  • It is recommended to avoid phrases such as:
    • “An investigation of…” or “A study into…”

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Writing an Abstract

  • The abstract will provide a summary of the most important facts or ideas
  • It is considered to be a mini-version of the paper
  • You should state the field of study and the definition of the problem
  • You should also provide a main conclusion of the project
    • i.e. what was the main outcome?
  • Typically, an abstract will be between 300 and 500 words long
    • it should be no more than a single side of A4
  • The writing of an abstract should be in past tense and third person

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Introduction Chapter

  • The introduction chapter should be clear, concise and organised
    • it will aid in setting up the project and its importance
  • It should be written in an engaging manner to make the reader interested in your project
  • The purpose is to make an underlying foundation to the project
  • It will provide an overview of the subject area
  • Also used to define the structure of the dissertation
    • details what will be discussed in each chapter
  • A structure similar to:
    • describe what is known about the problem
    • describe what is unknown about the problem
    • discuss why the study is important

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Literature Review Chapter

  • Provides a review of research paper, and details:
    • the complete story about your research topic
    • how your project fit within existing work in the area
  • Gives a theoretical background to the project area
  • Enables you to justify how your findings are relating to the body of knowledge in your research area
  • Helps establish a link between what you propose to examine and whats already been done
    • assist you in refining your research methodology
  • It is not a summary of literature, but an argument
  • Follow these rules:
    • only provide literature which helps the research
    • cite and reference each paper correctly
    • provide a summary of what the author did and how it informs your research
    • critique the work — what was good and what was bad?

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Methodology Chapter

  • Explain how the work will be done and the methods you are using
  • Essentially, this is your research design
    • explain as much as necessary so the reader can reproduce the project
  • Start writing this chapter as you are performing any experiments/investigations
  • Provide a reference if necessary to procedures you are copying and or those that have been described previously
    • i.e. following another researchers’ methodology, cite them

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Implementation Chapter (if applicable)

  • Explain the important aspects of your implementation
  • Discuss and show algorithms that are necessary for your work
    • should be shown as a code listing and labelled appropriately
  • Provide details about the key technology and tools
  • Give a detailed description on the development process
    • were there any challenges? if so, how were they addressed?

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Results and Analysis, and Discussion

Results and Analysis Chapter

  • Describe the findings of your research
  • Explain any observations made from your experiments
  • Provide your data and the evidence for it
  • Data can be represented in tabular or graphical
    • but do not over-do it
    • do not just include graphs and tables
  • If you have any negative results - talk about them
    • these may be important to other people
    • do not leave them out “bad data” as they could be useful later

Discussion

  • Provides your own point of view on the results obtained
  • You are expected to interpret and describe the significance of your findings
  • Summarise your achievements and deficiencies of the project
    • be honest about the deficiencies and inadequacies of your work
  • Part of the process for this chapter is to demonstrate your ability to recognise the problems that remain
  • Highlight the importance of your study and what you have contributed
    • think of arguments in-favour and against your results

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Project Management Chapter

  • This chapter will contain your reelection on the management of your project
  • You should consider the social, legal or ethical issues
  • Provide a discussion to responses you received from the feedback of your supervisor
    • the first supervisor will know how well you tackled the problem
    • your second marker will not
  • Consider the following:
    • what problems did you encounter? how did you overcome them?
    • how diligently did you work?
    • how did you seek advice? and how did you respond to the advice?
  • This should be evidence driven
    • provide evidence in the form of meeting logs in the appendices etc
  • Reflect on the timeline of the project
    • create a new Gantt chart and compare it to the one provided in the project proposal

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Conclusion Chapter

  • This will be your opinion after considering all the information
  • You should:
    • summarise your principal findings
    • emphasise what should be accepted as the new established knowledge
  • It will link back to your introduction
  • Must contain a summary of evidences supporting each conclusion made
  • Provide a brief statement on how your solution addresses the problem stated

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Bibliography/References Chapter

  • Not a chapter of sorts, it is a list of citations used in your project
  • Necessary to provide validation to the work undertaken
  • Lets the reader know where you have collected relevant information from
  • Use the APA referencing style, seventh edition

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Narrative Convention

  • The report should be written in a third-person manner
    • except for the Project Management Chapter
  • The choice of words and phrasing is formal
  • Which of these is a better approach of writing?

I really expected that the results would be different, like, the way in which I was able to get feedback from my parents.

The results obtained from the experiment were not as expected. The feedback received from some of the participants…

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Dissertation Report Templates

  • Two templates are provided for your report:
  • Use a template you will be most familiar with
    • if you do not know LaTeX, do not use it!
  • There are no marks associated with which template you use
  • However, it is imperative you stick to the template and sections provided

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Some Advice…

  1. Do not start with the introduction or conclusion
    • the purpose of the study may change, you do not want to re-write the introduction again and again
    • start with the literature review
      • this is one of the most time-consuming parts of the report
    • then work on the methodology, results etc.
  2. For each chapter, you will need the following:
    • an introduction
    • the main body of that chapter
    • a conclusion
  3. Do not write in first-person
    • work should be written in third-person
    • when writing the methodology, do not write it as if the study has already been done
  4. Write with conciseness and brevity in mind
    • do not include stuff not pertinent to the topic being discussed

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